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Writing Summary by Fitri Nurwiyanti
An article in Campus magazine entitled
“Publics Participation For Education” by Miftakhul Khoiri presents the first
school Taman Siswa built by
Ki Hajar
Dewantara. Education paradigm is growing in Indonesia to fulfill the sprit of
education these days. Citizens should get competent education. Education is
responsibility by government and the side of private sector individual and
group. Because of limited cost, the government opens the opportunity for public
to participate and develop business education such as; building opening
schools, courses, or skill education with facilities more complete and better
than government schools. Supported by complete and good facilities make this
school rather expensive because it also promises the good management on its
education.
Indonesia has pesantren as education system (Islamic boarding house models). It
is classified into two models: First Traditional, it does not collect the
payment from the students and students can stay and study freely. They study
about Islamic science for the sake of individual and public. The traditional pesantren still be one choice by our
society under class social. Second, Modern pesantren
collects the payment of the students because it gives more ability and
knowledge for students. They do not only study about Islam but also other
sciences like Biology, Mathematics, Economics, Physics, Language and Art. They
are prepared to face the era that always changes.
Without already realized the friction that
could be happened from motivation of organizer and management of existing
education. To get the good education with their equipment of facility they
perform forced the citizen get dealing with power of bargain and faces the
reality of expensive school and that also is for rich man children. Poor people
who have not the purchasing power to bargain they will lose their formal
education. Government and private sector individually and group have big
homework to repair their education inspect that aims on making organization of
education.
I agree with the writer who says that
about publics participation for education is importance. He says that the
education not only managed by government, but also the society has contribution
to build education together, about how they create good education, both the
facilities, system and soon. The government should think that all the society
level can enjoy education reasonably. Moreover, to get good education with
equipment of facility they perform to force the citizen get the power of
bargain and faces the reality of expensive school and that also is for rich man
children. I think that the middle society should optimalize brilliant brain to
be able to compete with others. The writer says that the poor people who have
not the purchasing power to bargain they will lose their formal education. I
think that this statement is true. The government and the private school should
really provide scholarship for the students who have competence to enjoy
education.
what kinds of cohesion are used in the text and explain the
meaning each comprehensively ?
Writing Summary by Fitri Nurwiyanti
An article in Campus magazine entitled
“Publics Participation For Education” by Miftakhul Khoiri presents the first
school Taman Siswa built by Ki Hajar
Dewantara. Education paradigm is growing in Indonesia to fulfill the sprit of
education these days. Citizens should get competent education. Education is
responsibility by government and the side of private sector individual and
group. Because of limited cost, the government opens the opportunity for public
to participate and develop business education such as; building opening
schools, courses, or skill education with facilities more complete and better
than government schools. Supported by complete and good facilities make this
school rather expensive because it also promises the good management on its
education.
Indonesia has pesantren as education system (Islamic boarding house models). It is
classified into two models: First Traditional, it does not collect the payment from
the students and students can stay and study freely. They study about Islamic science for
the sake of individual and public. The traditional pesantren still be one choice by our society under class social.
Second, Modern pesantren collects the
payment of the students because it gives more ability and knowledge for students. They do
not only study about Islam but also other sciences like Biology, Mathematics,
Economics, Physics, Language and Art. They are prepared to face the era that always
changes.
Without already realized the friction that
could be happened from motivation of organizer and management of existing
education. To get the good education with their equipment of facility they perform forced the citizen get
dealing with power of bargain and faces the reality of expensive school and
that also is for rich man children. Poor people who have not the purchasing
power to bargain they will lose their formal education. Government and private
sector individually and group have big homework to repair their education inspect that aims on
making organization of education.
I agree with the writer who says that
about publics participation for education is importance. He says that the education not only
managed by government, but also the society has contribution to build education
together, about how they create good education, both the facilities,
system and soon. The government should think that all the society level can
enjoy education reasonably. Moreover, to get good education with equipment of
facility they
perform to force the citizen get the power of bargain and faces the reality of
expensive school and that also is for rich man children. I think that the
middle society should optimalize brilliant brain to be able to compete with
others. The writer says that the poor people who have not the purchasing power
to bargain they
will lose their formal
education. I think that this statement is true. The government and the private
school should really provide scholarship for the students who have competence
to enjoy education.
This text use 2 cohesion , the first is
cataphoric and anaphoric. I will try to explain the meaning of each
comprehensively for you.
1.
This : business
education
2.
It :
business education
3.
Its : business education
4.
It :
pesantren
5.
It :
traditional pesantren
6.
They :
student of traditional pesantren
7.
Our :
citizent
8.
It :
modern pesantren
9.
They :
student of modern pesantren
10. They : student of modern pesantren
11. Their : organizer and management of existing
education
12. They : organizer and management of existing
education
13. They : poor people
14. Their : poor people
15. Their : Government and private sector
individually and group
16. He : the writers
17. They : government and society
18. They : rich man childreen
19. They : poor people
20. Their : poor people
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